עָלַי לְהַעֲנִיק לַדָּם
אֶת צִבְעוֹ הָרָאוּי
אֲבָל אָדֹם
הוּא עֲדַיִן צֶבַע
שֶׁאֵינֶנִּי מְעִזָּה
לְבַקֵּשׁ
This Sunday we (unknowingly) celebrated a Birthday.
- I received some poems from Efrat Mishory (one of the Poetesses I adore), and used it at the session. we made a nice gift for her (I hope she likes it :)
We were at the Rodin museum garden (a beautiful Sunny Sunday!)
I printed some poems (in Hebrew) on A3 / A4 papers
Than:
- a page is randomly picked by a participating drawing-ninja.
- I read the poem in Hebrew, than a free-translation, than read it again
- Participants wrote what they wanted on the page to remember it
And now, go and draw something, and use the poem as an inspiration (or don't), but try not to illustrate it... see if it clashes with the reality you put on paper.
Notes:
- When publishing below, I kept the drawing orientation. (and not the text one)
- The A3 papers had an printing problem so some pixels of the text are not printed.
- I uploaded all drawing in arbitrary order, and numbered them, so when (and if) you leave comments, you can refer to a certain one.
- Translations below are clumsily done by me, and I tried to put in parentheses double meanings.
Below are the results,
Happy Birthday, Efrat!
#1
A poem
is a tool
with a one-second warranty
#2
Shall we walk on the moon?
#3
Save yourself
from the place
you are about (standing)
#4
You knew how to give
only answers
therefore I asked
A lot of questions?
#5
There are all sorts of approaches to the past
I smell
the tomorrow
And remember
Thru today
#6
Minifying glass
Note: posted small at direct orders
#7
I gave you a mountain
I gave you a mountain
I gave you a mountain
#8
Everything crumbles
to a form (shape)
Note: Michel was so frustrated when he realized the letters were badly printed,
Still - the Hebrew-ness is in there, and it can be read.
(and me - I like noise and distortion and abstraction levels...)
#9
A poem
is a tool
with a one-second warranty
Note: a drawing by my first 'student' and two new and 'I don't know how to draw' members
#10
Shall we walk on the moon?
#11
Whoever got others
out
to continue
staying in
doesn't know
that I am sending a hand
inside
to continue
getting out
#12
Not fortified anymore
(not in a shape (hence shape-less) anymore)
Note: a four handedrawing
#13
The question is asked why?
and the answer is given: because (like that)
The question is asked how-much?
and the answer is given: a mountain
--
Beh
#14
Want (in plural) growth
and not
signs of growth
want love
and not
signs of love
want warmth
and not
a broken oven
Note: two-handed
#15
I'm
shivering (Female form)
from heat
cold
and mediocrity (in-between-ness)
Note: three-handed
#16
Laying
inside a hammock
rocking
with no mercy
We are uncomfortable
from how comfortable we are
#17
No more
Not yet (more no)
#18
If the infinity steps in the room
we'll show him
what
is
#19
Save yourself
from the place
you are about
to occupy inside me
Note: done in a rush using both hands by a new member
#20
The pencil point that was shrusted
determined the destiny of the circle
That I have to make
here
Note: left + right hand
#21
The defeat makes me
want to get dirty
- (makes) you
(want to) stay clean
we are both very clean
Note: left + right hand
#22
I'm
shivering (Female form)
from heat
cold
and mediocrity (in-between-ness)
#23
Kisses to everyone who
shall not be (to whoever)
---
---
the light is blind!
the light is blind!
the light is blind!
Note: drawns without looking @ paper
#24
Minifying glass
#25
I
am refusing (female form)
to any red offer
#26
Talking
Is a form of communication
---
She has a mouth
he has an ear
They talk
She speaks
he is silent (active tense)
They talk
#27
No more
Not yet (more no)
Note: done with eyes closed
#28
To give you knew
only answers
therefore I asked
A lot of questions?
Note
#29
Everything crumbles
to a form (shape)
#30
Talking
Is a form of communication
---
She has a mouth
he has an ear
They talk
She speaks
he is silent (active tense)
They talk
Note: two people drawing
#31
We shall meet
when we will be free
Note: 3peopledrawing
#32
Squirting triangles in all sorts of shapes
doing them troubles, doing them troubles
rounding lines in a precision of a compass
raising (waking) worries, raising worries
Note: do you see Rodin's thinking-man?
#33
You dreamt always of full lips?
Why dream?
Fill now
a form
#34
Don't close me in
in a bubble
that you're about (that you are standing)
to burst
#35
- (the sea drowned)
- (the sea drowned)
- (the sea drowned)
Note: 'I wanted to draw the fountain's water, but settled for waves of flowers' (a quote)
Also - the original intention was horizontal:
Wow!
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